there were three girls having a quiet night in, watching movies, eating popcorn and having a pjs party.
they hear a knock on the door, there friends from the same street want to come and join them. they all enjoy the movies.
then there was a power cut and the friends had no candles or touchs so they was unable to see anything.
suddenly there was a scream fro one of the girls. one of them found a touch near by and turned it on, she also screamed.
one of the three boys they let into the house was a vampire and they dident know because it was dark.
that one boy was sucking blood out of the girls neck and no one had known what to do to save her, however they had discovered that the boy was carrying holy water, so one of the girls grabbed the water and poured it over them both so that they girl could stay human, but it was too late she would of had also become a vampire herself, there was no way that she could go back to leading a normal human life.
that same night there was another power cut and the boy tried to bit another one of the friends, but he had tried to stop himself but it did not happen so the second girls who was bitten had no chose but to get real holy water and pour it over the boy.
the group of friends were still terrified of what happened so they tried to kick the boy out before one of the girls parents came home from work.
I really like the idea, it is a simple and explicit way to portray your vampire storyline :)
ReplyDeleteclear identification of the audience and use of horror conventions, the teens in a house, the lights going out and it being night. The reveal of the vampire in the dark could be really effective using a torch. The idea is achievable and offers some good opportunities for film making.
ReplyDeleteThink about how you develop this with the use of mise en scene and iconography remembering that this will support your grade. Also can you challenge the conventions and representations.